Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one career. To what extent do you agree ?
The importance of role of personal development in the professional growth and development of one’s career was always a debatable topic. Even though many people believe that personal development plays an major role in career propagation. others reject this notion and argue that personal development has no significant impact on professional development. In my opinion, former propagation appears to be more rational. So, this will discuss the both aspects in my upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are several reasons behind this statement but and foremost is that in present running competition world, organizations are looking for candidate with good personal skills. personal development helps to improve talents and potential which is required achieve success. Secondly, it’s also helps to improve awareness and identity which in turn creates your own name in the office and build trust.
On the other hand, critics may point out that personal skills has nothing to do with the personal growth. They believe that it’s entirely depends on the performance and how efficient perform on their job. For instance, performance rating are totally dependent on how ell employee performed the job and delivered the product the deadline.
To sum up, interpersonal skills plays vital role in human life. It is good way to achieve success in their life. professional is highly dependent on your personal development skills.
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| 2019-07-12 | gurwinder singh sandhu | 72 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4932735426 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89032151409 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2428464699 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274972103062 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918936322929 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103425311577 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148767013011 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808267969575 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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