Some people believe that the aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. Give your opinion.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that aim of education is one of the most prominent topics of the contemporary discussion. The following paragraphs will give inevitable reasons and will provide a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, education plays vital role in the lives of a common men. When a person get quality of education from school and university then he will able to get good job in the market. Moreover, it is difficult to say that anyone can get a respected job without education.
In addition, a person with education can have ample of opportunities in different fields like education, medical, army and so on. Furthermore, a illiterate person can face plethora of problems in his life due to lack of employment. Lastly, education is important for every to run a healthy life.
To conclude, education play crucial role in order to get good job, so I totally opine with the given statement. Government should take steps to improve the quality of education in the nation.
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Suggestion: man
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 188.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89570872459 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2509601144 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135432245532 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470645418667 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262434995619 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741260070207 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312039106792 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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