Do you think design of buildings have positive or negative impact. Which way it can effect on work and live?”
In the present world, the architecture of a building can or cannot be beneficial for its residents. Some people may be in accord with the conception that design of the house impacts the life of humans positively, while others may differ. In my opinion, power to design may or may not be helpful to the people residing in it and requires further deliberation.
To begin with, the construction and plan of a building can be fruitful for the living beings there. The reason is that a good and sound design encourages proper ventilation and natural light in the house which helps to promote good health of the people. For example, north or east facing houses as per Vast science, are considered to be prosperous. Hence, the correct planning of the house is of the utmost importance for the residing habitats.
On the flip side, a disaster in the architecture of a building can be dreadful for the owner. To put it in another way, a fault in the design can lead to various health and mental problems for the occupants. For instance, people often avoid south-west facing villas because they face the sun at noon which causes overheating and harm the health. Finally, it is clear from the above explanation that the wrong plan is not beneficial for the residents.
In conclusion, the construction planning of a residence decides its fate, whether it will benefit the owner or not. Thus, power to design is either profitable or not for the people living in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76377952756 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70202675818 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523622047244 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5860871039 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131920906848 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521875042292 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427049109528 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818131482588 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164262533869 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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