Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease Pros and cons?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns is one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that today life is very easy, every field used internet, so in medical line use this technology can not contribute to any time use video communication is effective in emergency situations, no waste time we can take medicine and get can advise from reputed doctors and hospital but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefits more when it come to being effective , but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of them lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as argument their chances of prosperity avoid excellence is concerned.
There are , however, some pitfalls that can easily over whelm the potential benefits of always technology work properly is not possible so internet facilities are not available in rural areas and misunderstanding of symptoms, while curing certain disease. The primary one steam from that fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of video communication are good for as a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86974207197 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7664914255 50.4703680194 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148572278978 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598271896466 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111210719409 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945974033949 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689988515496 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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