The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. So
who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments,
organizations or each individual?
In this day and age, environmental problems, like global warming, natural calamities, and so forth, have become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although protection of the environment by governments is regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals, there are a number of people hold an opposite view. I am inclined to strongly believe that the role of governments is more than of people and companies.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why I support governments should take responsibility for the environment. First and foremost is that they can impose strict rules to preserve the environment. Secondly, it is occasionally argued that positive results about the issue are attributed to the fact that governments have more power. From my personal experience, When I was in a factory, the government imposed rules so as to reduce air pollution. Consequently, it is quite clear that governments' measures can lead to solving environmental problems.
However, there is no doubt that environmental issues can provide individuals with various negative outcomes. Despite this possibility, it is highly claimed that different diseases are related to air pollution. By way of example, a recent academic research conducted by Oxford University researchers in 2012 has shown that global warming is negatively correlated with released gases from factories. Thus, it is quite obvious that diverse illnesses can be caused by pollution and that is why individuals and companies also should get involved in preserving the environment.
To put it in a nutshell, while there are several persuasive arguments on both sides, I am of the opinion that governments play an imperative role in tackling environmental issues.
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- agree or disagree: actions speak louder than words 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...a factory, the government imposed rules so as to reduce air pollution. Consequently, it ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36298932384 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16933435996 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0191480875 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769912321996 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028026394702 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348308530546 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398750295354 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027716768583 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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