The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?
Recently, the phenomenon of environmental problems and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of environmental change are caused by humans, such issue is regarded highly problematic and important by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe humans are causing damage and we have to take drastic measures to save our planet, which I will address in this essay.
From an environmental standpoint, the decisive role of humans to save the planet can provide some noticeable effects which are deeply rooted in the fact that humans are responsible for it. In the name of development, we have destroyed whole jungles which were not only home for various species but were responsible for converting carbon dioxide in to oxygen. For instance, our factories produce smoke and waste which directly affects the air and pollute our rivers. Thus, human’s involvement in polluting the environment can clearly be seen.
Nevertheless, humans are capable enough to reverse this change and save our planet to become inhabitable. Each and every individual need to come forward and help in restoring balance between humanity and nature. As a tangible example, if we have to cut down a tree then we need to make sure multiple trees are getting planted because trees play a major role in keeping the environment cool. Hence, it is correct to think that human can repair the damage.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments, I profoundly believe that it's not too late and it is everyone's responsibility to do their bit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16091954023 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91711567551 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8877188842 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111355758362 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357352369225 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360151773304 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622190073461 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215748391945 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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