Environmental Pollution.
Man is one of the precious works of creation. As long as man does not manipulate in the work of nature, his life moves smoothly. The interest of man has increased greatly due to the progress of science. According to the researchers, there is no such type of dirt in nature. The transformed nature does not harm the world until humans act wrongly.
In today’s scientific era, the number of motor vehicles, rail carts, and factories has increased many folds than earlier times. If the number of such vehicles and other pollution-causing agents increases, the pollution will also increase. There are many substances that come from factories that are very harmful to health. According to the researchers, the quantity of oxygen used in a motor vehicle for running 960 kilometers is the same amount of oxygen a man needs in one year.
Similarly, airplanes, sugar mills, leather, paper and rubber factories also need fuel. The smoke that emerges from the burning of such fuel is very harmful to the health. This pollution travels to several kilometers due to air flow. Pollution spreads in the air and thus, the oxygen deficiency also increases.
To counter the problem of pollution, the government needs to put factories out of the city and monitor their working. The government should find out different ways to avoid harmful smoke from vehicles and factories. Some of the advanced countries have already taken some measures to meet it. If we fail to restore the ecological balance right now, it would be too late tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98828125 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69393930146 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 1.56157635468 576% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1622565506 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1176470588 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967054974435 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317068843434 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706449839511 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057391305271 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058065410578 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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