A few individual trust that its government responsibility to guarantee that its national have a healthy diet, while others trust that it is the people duty. What is your opinion.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quik reflection on typical day reveals healthy diet is one of the most prominent topic. Some people assert that government should have responsibility to check healty diet for nations but some insist that it the people duty. In my point of view boths are responsibile to maintain healty diet.
To commence with,there are enormous way to maintain healty diet for nation by implementing government. Firstly, the authority provide awareness among people of proper food taking and maintain health by using different methods. Moreover, the government should proper checking of food products into the market in which shopkeeper provide better product to consumer. Furthermore, it provide the better health facilities of people like gym services and diet chart which follow the people to maintain thier health.
On the other hand, individual should take proper duty to maintain healty diet for nations. Firstly, it should gives proper food to society which contain nutrients and protien which people take it helpful to proper growth of body and mental ability. In addition to it, masses should implement proper diet chart in thier daily life and the responsibility of farmer should grown better quality of crops which they grown crops by using organic chemicals which is better for health.
In conclusion, provide proper healthy diet for nations and society it the equal responsibility of government and individuals which take proper step to maintain proper diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2955465587 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63642033637 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6441183909 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188318867406 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790373284408 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585924613445 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135074197608 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519645382712 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.