Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Do you think adults need games? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, the phenomenon of the importance of games for both children and adults and their corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of having enjoyable time is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that a relaxing mind can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
Within the realm of science, playing games can provide society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits, as well as advantages of honing cognitive abilities, are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment that discovered the importance of improving multi-task activities during doing games. Thus, beneficial ramifications of mental development are visible.
From a social standpoint, spending time playing games can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to the reality that the demerits of wasted time are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has described the role of enough time. Hence, predicted outcomes of flaw responsibilities are noticeable.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of having games far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of releasing minds prove the significance of reducing anxiety, but also pinpoint possible implications
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58369098712 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14967660385 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669527896996 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0566877504 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139508526429 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449579434004 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753579157281 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726714924288 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385226790379 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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