In globalization, it is impossible to succeed if you cannot speak at least one foreign language. Do you think everyone must learn at least one foreign language?
The controversial topic with respect to succeed never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether people should learn another language or not . As far as I am concerned, I tend to be the advocate regarding this issue.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that learn more can get more opptunities due to the fact that learn more knowledges can bring another chance in our life. The first point is regard to this is that people who can speak another language can get an overseas job. This is because nowaday some company wants their emplyees not only can do the job but also can have communication skills to everyone then then can do the business all over the world. A tour guide would be a convincing example. As a result, people should learn another language and can get a better chance such as tour guide.
In contrast, it is commonly believed as a fact that if people can only speak one language they will lose some opptunities. Admittedly, it is manifest that the most of the old generation are only can speak one language and they do have a good job. Nevertheless, this argument does not hold mater. It should be pointed out that everything has changed. This is to say, young generation need more skills to live in this society independently.
In a nutshell, due to the mentioned reasons, we may safely reach the conclusion that people should learn more tha one language to have more chance. Despite the fact that, the old generations are only can speak one, but only learn more then can get more opportunities such as tour guide.
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, as to, in contrast, such as, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 6.10837438424 327% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58888909151 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7324058814 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115868986261 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443880439213 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401814465306 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813906226229 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022766063093 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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