Government should build more roads to allow more vehicle owner or improve the network of public transport
Transportation is defiling now days .Government giving allots of facilities to public. And travelling is becoming more comfortable and easiest. Today’s lifestyle is become very fast so government should build more roads to allow more vehicle owner or government should improve the network of public transport. I will discuss plausible and feasible viewpoint of this statement.
Firstly, in today’s era government giving many benefits to human beings. They are making national highways that people can easily travel one place to another place. Moreover now day’s people do not have much time to wait in traffic. Because they have their busy schedule. After that they want to go their work on time. For example 60% of people do not get late for their work they always on time because of proper and safe roads. At the last people also travel comfortably in these roads because it is very smooth.
Secondly, public transport is very good for people .When people travel with public transport it can reduce the traffic issue because in world now days everyone have their own vehicle to travel that’s way its increasing pollution level and reducing natural resources. After that when people travel with public transport it can control pollution. Moreover it decreases the road accidents. On the next it can save the fossil fuels that are reducing day by day. For example in china more people are use public transport. Because they feel that public transport is better than other transport other transports.
To conclude, I think that both are good but in daily routine public transport is more preference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1825095057 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60484303673 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9670291109 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7222222222 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3446668982 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10676366013 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170240438423 0.071462118173 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255047920354 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213565818456 0.0609392437508 350% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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