The importance of travel seems to be over rated. Brilliant scholars locked themselves at home. Travel is important for education. To what extent to you agree or disagree.
In today’s world, there is an ongoing debate about travel and why it seems to be over rated. While there are some brilliant scholars locked themseleves at home, it is widely believed that travelling works wonder in terms of education. I am in agreement somewhat with this point of view. Therefore in this paper, the primary reasons associated with this will be discussed and focused on.
To begin with, travelling to different parts of the world can open mind. For example, scholars who are interested in travelling would significantly be able to expand their horizons. In addition, needing to assess and evaluate every data in different aspects, talents have a significant tendency towards travelling all over the world. Thus, this makes it clear that why have many journey can be substaitially important for well-educated person.
In stark contrast, however, some maintain that it is not necessary for the intelligent individuals. As an example, it has been assumed that eminent scholars can considerably benefit from a certain region far more than faraway places due to the fact that it is responsible for preventing of wasting of times to excess in scientific projects. Moreover, not only do young scholars can take full advantages of such approaches, but they are also able to concentrate more accurately, which, in turn, lead to more accurate and profounly pragmatic information regardless where they are. After analyzing this, it should be taken into account that the way modern scholars tend to do research can be vitally important.
As seen above, my personal sentiment is that each and every individual may incline to view this matter differently, but I do hold the belief that had young and great scholars had more travel, they would have gained more interpersonal and analytical skills, which broaden horizons towards complex issues, consequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'overrated'?
Suggestion: overrated
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun journey seems to be countable; consider using: 'many journeys'.
Suggestion: many journeys
...Thus, this makes it clear that why have many journey can be substaitially important for well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25333333333 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87586895081 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7356545069 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252373328377 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879715824168 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759968725857 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142962477533 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839693147879 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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