With increasing public demands and medical proofs which state that Cannabis is safe and has multiple applications in the field of medicine, there has a huge outcry towards its legalisation in the government. What are your thoughts on the legalization of Cannabis?
One of the most notable discussions in today’s world is the legalisation of Cannabis, while many medical research reveals that Cannabis can be helpful in many medical conditions, others hold the different view and its sparked a debate between the Government and public to legalise the Cannabis. However, this essay will discuss the negatives of Cannabis legalisation and its impact on our society as well as the human body.
There are myriads of arguments in support of my stance, but the most preponderant one is the addiction of Cannabis can prove fatal. If one consumes Cannabis on a regular basis, they are high chances that they will become of an addict to it. Furthermore, overuse of Cannabis can result in many health-related issues such as lowered blood pressure, increased cardiac rhythm, skin allergies and eyes redness.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is the legalisation of Cannabis can result in overuses, and the Government will lose its right to control the consumption. Let me put forth a recent article published in the New York Times, which invariably revealed that addicted people are using fake medical prescriptions to buy controlled drugs, and this malpractice can be used in the case of Cannabis as well. Moreover, it will become very tough for the Governments to crack down such illegal trade.
In the end, though many recent medical research’s advice the legalisation of Cannabis, for medical uses, but it has significant disadvantages discussed above. Thus, medical researchers should work on finding alternatives to Cannabis, instead of focusing on the legalisation of Cannabis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much medical research', 'a good deal of medical research'.
Suggestion: much medical research; a good deal of medical research
... is the legalisation of Cannabis, while many medical research reveals that Cannabis can be helpful in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3166023166 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00459539811 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4942972519 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153937904993 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623051927755 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328329691263 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955521022675 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300378840271 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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