It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.
The importance of getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice which was always debatable has now more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which I will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that getting married before finishing school is not beneficial for students. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that it is not good for students because it put more burdens on them. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that after finishing their job it is not a good choice to do job because sometimes they face problems to doing any work. Besides, some time they not have proper knowledge it is important to do further study. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of getting marriage and doing job is not good choice are indeed too great to ignore.
- education is very important 72
- large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. 80
- Government build more roads to allow more vehicle owner 77
- using credit cards are useful 72
- Which should require more financial support from the government health or education To what extent do you agree or disagree use your experience 55
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61061229716 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9263204939 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273272998312 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091868205313 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121457748653 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168687847373 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523138077386 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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