It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in ongoing debate that it is outdo to get married before finishing the education or job, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. Some people believe that getting married before job have a negative impact while others disagree . In this essay, I will elaborate both merits and demerits.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons of soaring concern. Firstly, in today's world, it is better to have a job at first, without job, it results in complications, responsibilities commence to soar, without having a good education and an apropos job to maintain family life is very hectic. For example in most of the countries, parents are letting their kids to get married without understanding the negative impacts that lead them divorce, Hence, needless to say that it is always outdo to aware the parents on negative facets of early stages of marriage on their kids.
To embark this, another pivotal facet, getting married and after getting the job will results also with family problems, it is irrefutable to say that all there are no such positive aspects that can be notified. For instance, a person on managing the new job, he/she may not accentuate properly on the Job which results in problems with the managers and destroy the Job. Apparently, it is always better, first to accentuate and well experience in job then to get married.
After analyzing, one can conclude that it is always advisable to be well organised in life with everything and aware to parents focus properly, to have a suitable background before marriage thus this are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outdone'.
Suggestion: outdone
...al upsurge in ongoing debate that it is outdo to get married before finishing the edu...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a negative impact while others disagree . In this essay, I will elaborate both me...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outdone'.
Suggestion: outdone
...ence, needless to say that it is always outdo to aware the parents on negative facets...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... married and after getting the job will results also with family problems, it is irrefu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92526690391 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70432330147 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0103889095 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235574893998 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949176714912 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766540177002 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139442788451 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084762232336 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.