It is common that most people is in poor health. outline how people can change their lifestyles and how nation can adjust the health care system to tackle this issue.
Good health is a fundamental need of a society as people can work more if they are healthy. On the other hand, people with poor health results in many problems. In this essay, I shall elaborate the reasons and explanations for supporting the notation and thus deduce the dialectic conclusion.
At the outset, myriad of benefits can be attributed the importance of good health as people can achieve their goals if they are healthy. However, today in modern era, people are having poor health due to change in lifestyle. People used to sit long hours in office to achieve their goals, which results in many diseases like backache, heart problems. Moreover, the change in lifestyle results in making people lazying as people do not go out to do physical exercise.
Another key justification for this notation is that government should spend more amount of money to improve health care system, so that treatment can be faster. I feel that health awareness programs should be conducted by government to aware people about the importance of good and poor health. In addition to this, government should monitor norms of private companies as these companies do not bother about health of the employee. Due to poor norms of the company results in more work that leads to poor health.
In conclusion, I feel people should change the working lifestyle, so that good health can be maintained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96566523605 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.610874635 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515021459227 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5920831995 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373170840555 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152563919591 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630628289356 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245092490015 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034838423011 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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