It is important for children to take extra classes or play after school? Discuss both and give your opinions.
class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">class="it">it class="is">is often argued class="that">that class="school">school children should enrol to class="extra">extra classes rather than playing games class="after">after class="school">school. A vast majority of people opine class="that">that attending class="extra">extra subjects class="is">is significant class="after">after a day in class="school">school. however, others refute this supposition and class="think">think class="that">that class="it">it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I strongly believe class="that">that participating in a physical activity class="is">is more beneficial. this essay class="will">will first elucidate the assertion of both sides of the class="argument">argument, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
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class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">On one class="hand">hand, participating in an class="extra">extra-curricular activity class="after">after class="school">school class="will">will profoundly increase the knowledge of a class="child">child. As matter of fact, the class="child">child class="will">will class="gain">gain an advantage from the rest of the class due to the advanced lessons class="that">that he or she class="will">will class="gain">gain from these class="extra">extra classes. To cite a primary example, a recent study shows class="that">that 90 percent of students with honors took class="extra">extra classes class="after">after their day in class="school">school. however, this essay disagrees with this view because attending another class class="after">after class="school">school class="will">will have a detrimental effect to the motivation of a class="child">child to study in the long run.
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class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">On the other class="hand">hand, joining physical activities such as playing sports or games class="will">will make the young ones physically and mentally fit. this class="is">is because being active strengthens the immune system as well as keeping the mind fresh. In other words, playing games also develop a class="child">child's mental ability. For instance, class="it">it has been proven by a group of researchers class="that">that class="after">after a physical activity, the brain increases its learning capacity to a staggering 70 percent. For this reason, this essay agrees with this view because playing games not only makes a class="child">child healthy but also develop its mental abilities.
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class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height: normal">In conclusion, although there class="is">is a strong class="argument">argument class="that">that the youth must attend class="extra">extra lessons class="after">after class="school">school, this essay agrees with those class="that">that class="think">think class="that">that playing class="is">is more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3668.0 1207.87684729 304% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 329.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 11.1489361702 5.00649968141 223% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.3779267583 2.71678728327 456% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 963.9 379.143842365 254% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.57093596059 185% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 146.04048145 50.4703680194 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.533333333 104.977214359 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112415293457 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853927351817 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324144416081 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707589215057 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412211891099 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.1 12.6369458128 333% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -59.82 53.1260098522 -113% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 10.9458128079 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 47.39 11.5310837438 411% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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