It is important for school children to study music, art, and sports as it is for them to become literate and numerate. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Music, art, and sport are the three fields where the schools are encouraging their students to participate. These activities have a profound impact on the young bud's mental and physical health. This essay will discuss why activities like music, arts, and sports should be part of the academic curriculum.
Firstly, all the aforementioned activities help a student to grow his cognitive abilities. Improving the cognitive ability means better performance in studies which will eventually secure good job prospects. Moreover, the students are able to solve mathematical problems with expeditiously. For instance, according to a research conducted by Oxford University, many young children who are learning music and arts, tend to solve a complex mathematical problem and this improves their problem-solving skills. As a result, these activities benefit the students in improving their thought process and enable them to be more creative.
Secondly, activities like sports assist the students in maintaining good physical health. Many students actively participate in sports and are more energetic in their day to day routines. Also, involvement in sports is directly related to improved literature skills, thanks to a new survey. According to the survey conducted by Nestle corporation, over 68% of students involved in sports tend to score more in their language exams and are good at grammar. Thus, activity like sports broadens the horizon of mastering any language.
In nutshell, this essay described how activities like music and art improve the knowledge in numbers and how involvement in sports is related to better literacy skills. In my opinion, activities such as music, arts, and sports are a vital part of a student's education and will create a better future for them if learned properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... arts, and sports are a vital part of a students education and will create a better futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92278173342 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8406430889 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131534148027 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480725030733 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395793859818 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938040858042 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396395529231 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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