It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that married before completing the studies and then get established in a good job.While is possible to claim that early marriage at 20's is perfect for personal and professional life, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, I would like to state that, if once someone gets married at a younger age, as human nature they will think about personal life rather than professional life because new responsibility will be added and they need to fulfill those commitments. To illustrate, earning money is the biggest challenge after marriage because one need to also take care of life partner.
In Continuation to the above point, I would also like to state that maturity level is not up to the mark at younger age, this will come up with experience so these additional responsibilities will put more burden on mind. For example, once having kids in younger age, they also need to give time to family members and lack of time will effect the personal life.
Those who argue for early age marriage and then getting job having a different view and say that it can be actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that early marriage gives enough time to understand to each other. But, In my opinion that both can not pursue higher education together. In order to live a quality life, both needs to do work to fulfill their dreams.
While there are strong argument on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that the once the professional life is settled after that it is good idea to ready for marriage.
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...it is good idea to ready for marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69023569024 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56733068387 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0273355363 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122043088639 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435776133768 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707500552672 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714122373832 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673786968931 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.