In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting
many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it
be taken care of?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in number of problems all over the
world that need to be take care by the governments and international organizations. While air pollution is top most
problem in contemporary world weather some people believe that job and health sector are important issue. There are
a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided
that some effective measures are taken.
These are a myriad of reasons associating with this soaring concern unlike everyday problems, which can be dealt with
easily, air pollution, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of such issues as health problem and lead to various diseases. To exemplify, according to study by world health organisation, 50% of deaths in developing nations are due to air pollution.Thanks to aforementioned predicaments, it is not only people but also society which can suffer immensely.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are in front not remote or complicated but accessible and predictable. The primary one stems from the fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and polices, government authorities can help a nation thrive.Besides, international organizations and local authorities should take the necessary initiative cumulatively. Only when convergent from all sectors are ensured, we can except to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.
To conclude, dealing with air pollution is one of the most prevalent problems that faces most all parts of the
world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the against this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33916083916 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1257822142 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4526970839 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266877616482 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093398238331 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856003142111 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108764237324 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054460439419 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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