It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good
choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's era, early marriage before finishing school or getting a job is widely debateable. While married in younger age which lead to immature behaviour whether some people think that to get married in early age assert the affirmation and strong bonding. This essay will explain why to get married in younger age is not wise decision. The following paragraphs will explain both, the advantages and the demerit of the stance taken with the pertinent aspects and examples.
To begin with, there are myriads of reason which proponents cite for grim effects on early age marriage. One of the most preponderant reason is that these people’s faces the financial crises, distress and career instability due to incumbent of raising the kids and family dependency. To exemplify, according to research by international family planning, 45% more divorced rate of early marriage compared to those who married after stability of career. Therefore, not only this raised the coarse in human nature but also impacts in social and economic life.
In contrary, there is another stratum of society who belives that early marriage gives ecstatic moments. Furthermore, they have good bonding and exumberant life that leads to impeccable between the couple. To elaborate, according to research by world relationship department, 30% more happiness found in early married youngster those compared to married in adult age.Hence, not only early marriage sheer strong relationship but also strong bonding.
In conclusion, to get married before getting job or finishing school is not a wise decision. In my opinion, the demerit overweigh the advantages that to get married in early ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... those compared to married in adult age.Hence, not only early marriage sheer strong r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35606060606 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75636836704 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4691791985 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207481022544 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929585122997 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136089944687 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16637408941 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156239192908 0.0609392437508 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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