How widely of you think the problem spread that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage. What problems will it casue?
In today's era, it is certainly true that most people spend too much time on work rather their personal life. While overtime work leads to distress and adverse effects whether some people think that spend more time on work give self-satisfaction and professional growth. These essays will explain why spend too much time on work having grim effects. The following paragraphs will explain both, the merit and disadvantages of the stance taken with pertinent aspects and examples.
To begin with, there are myriad of reason which proponents cite for adverse effect of spending to much time on work. One of the most preponderant reason is that one cannot give sufficient time to their family and Friends that leads to anxiety and Coarse behaviour. To exemplify, according to research international health organisation, 40% increase in cases of depression and suicide due to succumb pressure compared to those who maintain the work life balance. Therefore, it is apparent that short term gain creates the individual deteriorating instability in life.
In contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that spending to much time on work will help in professional and economic growth. Furthermore, in contemporary times, they can fulfil all the dreams like to buy expensive cars, watch and big house so he feels ecstatic. To elaborate,
according to recent study by stanford university, Top position in corporates belong from who spend most of time on work compare to those who spend less time in work. Hence, not only too much time on work gives economic growth but also give colossal feelings.
In conclusion, spending to much time on work lead to distress and other physical ailments. In my opinion, the demerit over weigh the advantages to spend more time on work.
Lastly, one should smart enough, so they manage work as well personal life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72078252502 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7068870317 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347663560968 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132272938863 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867562775039 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186356269079 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831883840118 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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