Large shopping malls are replacing local small shops, some people think it is a positive development. Do you agree or not?
With the fast-changing development of technology and economy, shopping malls has become a heated debate among people. Some people claim that it is a positive development about large shopping malls are replacing local small shops, while others believe it is a negative development. From my point of view, I am in agreement with it is a positive development. My reasons and examples are given below.
First of all, it is undeniable that shopping in large shopping malls can save more time. To be specific, there are a large number of various stores and other facilities under one roof, thus people can purchase clothes and watch movie at one time rather than looking for different local small shops on the street and spending a lot of time on car parking before every shopping. To further support this statement, one example is that my friends and I often hangout in Chadstone instead of in city because it is hard to find an available car park in city and it takes time from one store to another.
Apart from that, it should also be taken into account that shopping in large shopping malls can save more money. To illustrate, usually there are numerous stores are competing in a same market in large shopping malls, which means they often offer kinds of discount on their products in order to stimulate consuming expenditure. From my own experience, people can save more money from purchase on discounted items during weekly or seasonly sales in large shopping malls.
To put it into a nutshell, a conclusion can be made that it is a positive development about large shopping malls are replacing local small shops, because shopping in large shopping malls can not only save more time but also save more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ve more time. To be specific, there are a large number of various stores and other facilities und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85034013605 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55188194069 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7741695932 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32891573878 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141755771697 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140825940993 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230985039669 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100627192365 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.