Nowadays more and more credit cards are used instead of cash. How realistic is it to have the idea of a cashless society? What are the benefits and shortcomings? Discuss.
Our society has been witnessing the contradictory views regarding whether the reality of cashless society is conducive to the individual’s life. From my observation, the cashless society has come already and the positive influences of that outweigh the negative ones.
At the outset, there are multifarious benefits of the cashless society, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that digital payment technology is efficient and convenient. It can not only let customer finalize payment with just one tap by credit card but also allow individual to transfer money to their friends with only one mobile phone. Besides, people don’t have to carry a lot of money when they go outside. According to the latest Oxford research, China would not have been developing so rapidly in recent years without imposing stringent policy in relation to the digital payment technology.
However, there are several pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential merits of the cashless society. Firstly, the preponderant one is that digital payment depends on electricity and internet. Secondly, cashless society leads to a situation that most people stay at home rather than go outside. Lastly, according to a report from the New York Times 2018, edition, the cybercrime rate has been increased by the popularity of digital payment.
As discussed above, one can conclude cashless society has come already. Furthermore, it has benefited individual’s life in numerous ways from finalizing payment, transferring money, not carrying cash and whatnot. Nevertheless, we cannot oblivious to some likely risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52016129032 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98369387007 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.87432029 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133599566117 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473672268276 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364261526139 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086577679798 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262278157321 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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