Nowadays more and more credit cards are used instead of cash. How realistic is it to have the idea of a cashless society? What are the benefits and shortcomings? Discuss.
Our society has been witnessing the contradictory views regarding whether the reality of cashless society is conducive to the individual’s life. From my observation, the cashless society has come already and the positive influences of that outweigh the negative ones.
At the outset, there are multifarious benefits of the cashless society, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that digital payment technology is efficient and convenient, which can not only let customer finalize payment with just one tap by credit card but also allow individual to transfer money to their friends with only one mobile phone. Besides, people don’t have to carry a lot of money when they go outside, according to the latest Oxford research, China would not have been developing so rapidly in recent years without imposing stringent policy in relation to the development of digital payment technology.
However, there are several pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential merits of the cashless society. Firstly, the preponderant one is that digital payment depends on electricity and internet. Secondly, cashless society leads to a situation that most people stay at home rather than go outside. Lastly, according to a report from the New York Times 2018, edition, the cybercrime rate has been increased by the popularity of digital payment.
As discussed above, one can conclude cashless society has come already and has benefited individual’s life in numerous ways from letting customer finalize payment with just one tap by credit card, allow ing individual to transfer money to their friends with only one mobile phone, not carrying a lot of money when they go outside and whatnot. Nevertheless, we cannot oblivious to some likely risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37184115523 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8709328118 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.234732527 50.4703680194 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.8 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120255401743 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467050174163 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356559489243 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812360925862 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224362371108 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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