Large shopping malls are replacing small shops what is your opinion about this?
The importance of shopping malls which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from fact that provided various facilities like parking, banking, restaurants, cinemas etc. It also save the time and energy and offers. Another pivotal aspect that this argument is that in addition to this it provides employment opportunities to many people discounts and offers attract more buyer’s .Needless to say that all this merits stand shopping malls in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that small businessmen lose their livelihood because of big business houses as a result as a illustration For example not only are the products very expensive and not affordable by all but also it. Hence it is apparent why many are against shopping malls.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of shopping malls are instrument indeed. Nevertheless the potential drawback should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30733944954 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79664946166 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.322375386 50.4703680194 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.555555556 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229489630441 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886590955321 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620534215883 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139010384491 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029680955515 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.