Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
The importance of big shopping malls replacing small shops, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. Although small businesses support the small households, big super-malls are replacing them. It can be agreed that large mega-complexes provide more benefits than small shops, but there are some drawbacks as well. This essay will discuss mega malls and small shops and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why large shopping malls are better than small, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that customers get a wide range of products in shopping malls. Consumers do not have to go to different shops to get different items. For an illustration, research in this area invariably reveals, about eighty percent of regularly used products are available in supermarket. Thus, it is apparent that shopping malls are better and they are replacing small shops.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe, small shops are cheaper and they sell quality products. Even though big shopping malls are the whole package, small shops are preferred worldwide. A recent research shows that eighty-five percent of Australia still prefers shopping in small shops. Therefore, it is obviously true small shops are irreplaceable and they are the pillars of the economy.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that small shops are affordable and they have many other features, which are irreplaceable. Although shopping malls have few advantages over small shops, they cannot beat small business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33992094862 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77446706874 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.852018901 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371434344539 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146292753937 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661506040677 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238755374622 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581461715197 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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