Leadership and influence
Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.
Leadership, in my opinion, must be well founded on proper knowledge in order to lead. I remember this one meeting at Integrated Diagnostics Holdings (IDH), where I used to work. We met to find out the reason why there are so many differences in results obtained by some of our colleagues. I said ''procedures''. They got different results because they followed different procedures. The meeting ended with a decision to establish a new department aiming at teaching the crew the same procedures, monitoring their adhesion to those procedures, and evaluating them.
I was appointed as the head of the new department, and realizing that I need to come out with a solution to the abovementioned problem, I spent the following few days reading every reference included in the laboratory standard operation procedure manual and every Clinical & Laboratory Standards Institute (CLSI) guideline in parasitology and microbiology. In less than two weeks, my procedures scheme was ready and in use, and the problem was solved.
My pursuit for knowledge was the mean reason why I joined the 6th cycle of the International Medical Laboratory Scientist (IMLS) training program, offered by the Engineering & Science Services (ESS) at the American University in Cairo (AUC) which is one of the most prestigious institutes in Egypt.
Now I have my own laboratory, where I am applying the same procedures scheme, in order to minimize the chance of errors in results. And here I am, standing in the middle of crossroads of great choices, hoping form the bottom of my heart to be accepted in Chevening’s scholarship program, to obtain proper learning, which will affect my whole life, my patients, and my community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 20.9802955665 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 360.0 242.827586207 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66168443583 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 139.433497537 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 90.0 20.5024630542 439% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4493912103 50.4703680194 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 420.75 104.977214359 401% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 90.0 20.9669160288 429% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.33497536946 731% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113168902626 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063151205384 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222390436943 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063151205384 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222390436943 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.6 12.6369458128 361% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.41 53.1260098522 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 10.9458128079 340% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.0 10.3980295567 365% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.