Life - pursue happiness or meaning
Generally, everyone have a different meaning to define happiness of their life. Some people think that instead of pursue happiness, we should pursue meaning of life. This essay will discuss why pursuing happiness is more preferable.
For most people, happiness of life could simply mean money. Happiness is an achievable target, which can be achieve easily by most people if they did not set the standard too high. For example, Rama earns $500 per month, but he is happy for it because he able to live by himself without people’s aid. Hence, compare to pursue meaning of life, happiness is much easier task for most people.
Furthermore, happiness can easily effect surrounding people. When people are happy, the mood will be transferred to surrounding people like friends and families. When happiness creates harmony among people, the world will become more peaceful. A social experiment shows that when a stranger smile on people on the street, 98% of them will respond to the stranger by smiling back. Therefore, happiness is the important aspect to maintain the peace of the world.
In a nutshell, happiness is not only easy to achieve by person, but also serve as one of the keys to keep the world peace when everyone is happy. In my opinion, I completely agree that people should pursue happiness rather than meaning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57124756037 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2725122126 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2857142857 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448065205189 0.242375264174 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173177262965 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147771415423 0.071462118173 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295537175777 0.151781067708 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187436900513 0.0609392437508 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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