Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
Nowadays the Y generation is more open-minded compared to X generation. Many couples are having an early marriage even they did not finish their study or having a job due to having sex activity before marriage and get pregnant. This essay will discuss why young people should not get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job.
It is fundamental knowledge that forming a family required financial support. When someone never finish his study and earn a living, he will never able to support his new formed family on daily basis such as shelter, food or happiness. A survey showed that at least $1500 is needed for a 3 person family to survive for a month in Australia, including daily expenses, house rental and basic insurances. Hence, without any financial support, it is doubted that it would be beneficial to form get married before completed study and get good job.
Furthermore, most of young people are act based on impulse. They are lack of life experience and they usually do not understand how the society works because they never experience it. Most of them will find out the marriage life have huge difference with what they imagined before after they get married and end up divorced. According to a research, 70% of divorce cases is built up by couples who aged 25 years old and below. Hence, it is advisable that young people should experience certain life changing period before decide to marry.
In a nutshell, this essay discussed that marriage need financial support and it is different than what young people usually imagine. In my opinion, I strongly disagreed that young people should get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finishes'.
Suggestion: finishes
...d financial support. When someone never finish his study and earn a living, he will ne...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...d financial support and it is different than what young people usually imagine. In m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, at least, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56841461471 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.520968078 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362837419164 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127630009313 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149012576389 0.071462118173 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244981540225 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123432640293 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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