Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is trying to getting married before completing studies and gaining a proper employment. There is a widespread worry that many youngsters waist their invaluable young life by getting married and collecting a lot of responsibilities into their lives. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that by getting married earlier instead of having a good occupation and education, people will busy with numerous responsibilities because they have another party to look after and fulfill their needs as a husband and wife. Not only, does this postpone their targets and achievements, but it can deteriorate them in physically and mentally. Needless to say, these drawbacks on someone's future are far-reaching indeed.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is people can improve and gain a lot of invaluable things to someone's life. If they can share responsibilities and other tasks with each other inevitably early married will not be harmful to anyone because it is easy to handle study and married life with a great contribution to each other.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite some benefits, the drawbacks of early marriages are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
.... There is a widespread worry that many youngsters waist their invaluable young life by ge...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th a great contribution to each other. In view of the argument outlined above, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26940639269 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01511658907 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1835281138 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167710370307 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571025310924 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650282385565 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931874404246 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752564440712 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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