In the 21st century, the majority of the population is living an unhealthy lifestyle due to fast and hectic schedules. Most of the time people are on the move either for the work or studies by ignoring their health. Health experts are debating over this phenomenon by raising their concerns over this severe pandemic. Many blaming individuals for poor lifestyle choices, while others are pointing fingers at governments. In this article, I will discuss the role of health and medical department for this ailment.
To begin with, the government has a major role to play when it comes to educating its citizen by conducting awareness programs at regular interval. For instance, a recent campaign by the health department of India on how to lead a healthy lifestyle has received a massive positive response. Post this program people are bit aware and educated for their eating, sleeping and working patterns. Moreover, they have also emphasized the importance of exercise and insisted to a member of society to follow healthy habits.
However, these are very little steps by the federal agencies, they should implement strict policies for the employers for reducing toxic and stressful workplace culture. For example, recent labor law in Europe stating lower working hours a week and permitting flexible working patterns was apprised by its citizen and has shown proven results with respect to healthy lifestyle and reduction of stress levels.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that although health and the medical department has a vital role to play in enlighting people for embracing a happy and healthy lifestyle, an individual should also be aware and take positive steps for improving their lifestyle after all health is actual wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22887323944 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63096508648 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8294236182 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239763399915 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879582706294 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927142863854 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152207655698 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804484851316 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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