The majority of television news being reported is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some people think that television news should be a mixture of good and bad news.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Television is a medium of getting information from all around the world. It is noticeable that the most of the news telecast-ed on television nowadays are comprise of mostly negative news of wars, crimes, accidents etc. Some people think that news should be a combination of both good and bad news. This essay will the reasons why television news should be a mixture of both positive and negative news.
On the one hand, positive news on television imparts a positive vibe to its viewers. When the viewers watch a good news on news channels they feel more optimistic towards their society and lives. For example, if an individual has watched some program on television, which conveyed a positive message of helping someone etc then he will implement that lesson his life as well. Thus, good program is a way to teach a wise lesson to an individual and also help in bring changes in his overall behavior.
While on the other hand, bad news are also necessary to show on the television due to several reasons. It is known that people learn from other's mistakes. So if someone, for instance, is watching something which is antisocial or bad such as crimes, wars, political turmoil etc in news then might it will teach him a lesson either to fight with those kinds of situation or not to repeat those mistakes in his real life. As a result of showing bad news on television, people learn the way to tackle with adverse situations.
This essay has argued that how by telecasting both positive and negative news on the television viewers get influenced in an optimistic way and also learn lessons to not repeat the mistakes in their own lives. In my way of opinion, showing both good and bad news should be shown to the people all around the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
... telecast-ed on television nowadays are comprise of mostly negative news of wars, crimes, a...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'comprised'.
Suggestion: comprised
... telecast-ed on television nowadays are comprise of mostly negative news of wars, crimes...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... to its viewers. When the viewers watch a good news on news channels they feel more optimis...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an optimistic way" with adverb for "optimistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n the television viewers get influenced in an optimistic way and also learn lessons to not repeat th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68831168831 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52528117898 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487012987013 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9354584338 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414501920388 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171474096711 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134742917521 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278175788285 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136248993495 0.0609392437508 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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