Many people like nurse and teachers should get more pay, especially in recent years, people in finance, film actors and company leaders are getting more pay. What's your opinion?
The importance of prestigious professions and how much they should receive for their duty, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The significant influence of nurse and teachers receive less than people in finance or even though actors and company leaders sparked the polemic over the potential impact of this trend on who should receive more for their importance job in recent years. it can be agreed that is publicity and media that pay high salaries for actors. this essay will elaborate how they could equal salaries and how they could give more importance for other jobs and thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why people receive less than other, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that huge companies pay more for their employees than hospitals and schools. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study shown that teachers receive 70% less per year than actor in just one TV comercial. Therefore, nurse that work sometimes more hours than teachers receive 14% more per year than a teacher.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which might overwhelm the substantial influence high salaries, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that the media is paying more for artists because they have many other companies involved on. For instance, a advertise might cost millions of dollars to be made instead a the same cost a hospital could be made for a small town. Hence, rich people just care about they own life and just look at other when need they.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of difference about payment is distinguished, although professions such as teachers, nurse and others should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03389830508 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62056920075 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7616933888 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214737595394 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846378451091 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637785401325 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121629100873 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051386112308 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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