Moving from rural areas to big cities will provide more opportunities. Your opinion.
The importance of big cities receiving people from rural area which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The significant influence of the are migrating from the countryside has sparked the controversy over the impact of this trend on better opportunities are being seeked in recent years. It can be agreed that nowadays has less jobs in the rural area. Therefore, this essay will elaborate on how it can be a positive aspect and how different can be for who stay in rural areas and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous positive reasons why people are leaving rural areas, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that the necessity to a better family income. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that 47% of people that live in regions quite away from the big cities are moving to get a job and better opportunities. However, few people after a few years are heading back to rural areas.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which might overwhelm the influence of the high competitivity in a big city, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that usually people come to study searching for a better qualification and then start to look foward new opportunities. For instance, tennagers are leaving the nest before become adults and go to experience a live alone with some times with family support or nothing even then braveness. Hence, the competitivity increase drastically in the big cities.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of rural areas experiencing less people in my opinion is distinguished, although the insight should not be overlooked.
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Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.889243059 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1306379517 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290255504381 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103824853019 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755313177222 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156081097061 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594730060139 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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