University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
The influence of acquire experience from university which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The significant impact of this popular debate became really important and it has sparked the controversy of this trend on which is more interesting to the job market in recent years. It can be concluded that people argue that university life is much more essential than an education degree. Therefore, this essay will show my opnion about these two different points that are similar despite clear diferences between and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why university experience that involve many fundamentals of the job market is crucial, but the most conspicuous one steam from the fact that without educational degree to learn more about the field that a student is being prepared to is fundamental to develop a good proffessional. As an illustration in my opinion, a University of Adelaide study has shown that educational degree is requested for many companies instead just university experience. However, both together make futher differences nowadays.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks that might overwhelm my opnion, but for me educational degree that is sustained for real studies is the most important in the job market.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the significance of acquire experience from university or educational degree is distinguished between people, although studies and researches should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46861924686 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03923561682 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4376274911 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363430423446 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145403728702 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123178774474 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191260526488 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787259994171 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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