Many people think regions affect successful persons what is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The substantial influence of people success has sparked the controversy over recent decade. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about home location plays major role in people success rather it's up to individual perceive the home dominance. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and thus will lead to the logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why native place influence, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that role model from the same region. In addition, there must successful leaders from the same location inspire upcoming generations. As an illustration, a well-established sport person from the same home town will create impact in the town. Because of this reason home location place vital role in people success.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that individual struggle towards the success. Furthermore, there will be major setback in every location. For instance, until people see the success in that region demotivation occurs. Thus, it will be a huge impact for people who are trying to succeed.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that home region has influence on people success as well as individual tolerance towards the demotivation. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that people should ignore the negative comments and focus on success will make the difference in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me town will create impact in the town. Because of this reason home location place vita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30131004367 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75238065043 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7767935576 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214898465124 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758871747463 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586329386624 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132146021491 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299970162749 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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