The choice of distance between university and home, which is always debatable, has now become unprecedented controversial. It's argued that selecting an institute far way from home has some positive impacts. I am of the opinion that we would rather make the opposite choice. This article will elaborate both of the arguments and thus lead to a constructive conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why some students prefer an university in a different city even in another country. The most dominant one lies in the fact that people believe leaving high school is the first stage in our life that we should live alone without parents. As an illustration, according to Shanghai Daily, teenagers who leave their hometowns for further education tend to have 30% more friends than their peers.
Nevertheless, there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that many families rely on their children even more than the opposite. Furthermore, distance is not the key factor that affects how we behave ourselves, and also not the excuse that impedes students' growth. From my own experience, an appropriate choice is to make parents feel comfortable while figure out the aim of staying in the university.
Considering all the substantial insights above, we can safely reach a conclusion that although a remote university can force us to live without parents which brings some benefits, choosing a near academy is a better decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09795918367 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8391972867 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661224489796 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2863912966 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208240155173 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584769742139 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406100196706 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106175674592 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245029565948 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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