Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind?
Recently, the phenomenon of longevity of mankind and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of human long life is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that life expectancy can be a plus and I will scrutinize that throughout this essay.
From a technology standpoint, medical technology can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of provided high level of sanitation, as well as living standard’s improvement, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was university student, I performed an academic research which discovered the miraculous results of medical developments of mankind life time. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both better live and high-level human lives apparently can be seen.
On the other hand, within the realm of society, longevity might increase the consequence of population bustling growth. Moreover, fundamental aspects of undesirable results of natural resource consumption would relate to this reality that the demerits of environmental irreparable damages pertain to uncontrolled increasing population. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of unfavorable influences of technology is correlated negatively with overcrowded cities. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of lack of opportunities for new generation.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both side, I profoundly believe that the benefits of medical technology far weigh its drawbacks, not only do the advantages of life expectancy prove the significance of human kind, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ults of medical developments of mankind life time. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79783393502 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36648745117 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660649819495 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5742534121 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23320436838 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666893707153 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478163418639 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119289586495 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603841526652 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 53.1260098522 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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