What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
Recently, the phenomenon of the best invention of the century and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the computer invention is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that airplane and antibiotics inventions can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the antibiotics discovery can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of destroying infections, as well as providing healthy life, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the intriguing results of antibiotics use and computer helpful invention. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both digital innovative and salient facts of antibiotics apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of technology, the airplane crash might increase the consequence of passenger’s injuries even death. Moreover, fundamental aspects of technology addiction would relate to this reality that the demerits of the vehicle-dependent lifestyle pertain to increasing air-pollution rate. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of altitude allergies is correlated negatively with uncomfortable travel. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of unpleasant flying.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of computer and antibiotics far weigh its drawbacks. Not only do advantages of easy and healthy life style prove the significance of high level sanitation, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'antibiotics'' or 'antibiotic's'?
Suggestion: antibiotics'; antibiotic's
...essay. From a social standpoint, the antibiotics discovery can provide the society with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81454545455 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39661669293 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661818181818 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8466114385 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0392335012705 0.242375264174 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146021594475 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286686894398 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0235730290818 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040829684058 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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