Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this tech-savvy era, it is an irrefutable fact that human kind has progressed tremendously and current era is enriched with new inventions. In this comprehensive world, people life span and effective surgeries improving the human health. Most of the people believe that it is boom and others claim with their argument. The below paragraphs will discuss about both positive and negative discussion.
On the one hand, people are becoming perky with the advanced medical care. People will work very actively for the enlargement of company and produces more productivity. Secondly, young generation can learn their grandparents experiences and about the immemorial days of them. Moreover, advancements in the surgeries have reduced the suffering of the people and people are delighted with their treatments. For instance, according to the published news in a newspaper, 2.5 million people have successful knee transplantation surgeries in India in the span of five years.
On the other hand, every coin has the both sides and there are some pitfalls by advanced medicines. First and foremost, scarcity of resources will occur with the increase in life expectancy. Other than this, as population raises many countries might face the poverty and starvation as the food production is not enough to the people in the country. Thirdly, financial burden will increase for the families with check-ups and regular visit to the hospital.
To conclude it, advanced technology in the medical care is very good for the humans in the twenty first century, many advanced medical facilities are very expensive which poor people can’t effort it. So government should take care about the price of the treatment for the middle and low class families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34909090909 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81326289567 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6943817552 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12483227246 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385953925466 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448237361208 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786343481367 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442045444398 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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