There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
In this globalized world, the way of communication is changed by the advanced technology. A drastic rise up in using mobile phones is changed the communication. Smart phones brought a new way of communication. Even though, it is an advanced version to communicate it also have both advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, from last decade people are communicating all over the world through smart. It brought our world very near. There are many facilities with smart phone. One can communicate very easily with calling, social media applications, messaging, and video calling. For example, students who are living far away from their parents for higher education can communicate by video call. It provides face to face communication where students can feel happy by seeing their parents. Moreover, smartphone also provides many applications which are useful to education like grammar apps, language improving apps etc.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages with the smart phones over using and miss using of it. Smart phone brings many changes especially in teenagers. Many aspirants uses social media for more time which is a big time waster. Moreover, for children, playing games in smart phones don’t provide any physical exercise.
By this it can be concluded that, even though there are some negative impact by smart phone using, the advantages over flow the disadvantages. Using it in a proper way brings many benefits to the human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s over flow the disadvantages. Using it in a proper way brings many benefits to the human life....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28510638298 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87546244829 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.655811033 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0588235294 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8235294118 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113721634147 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433370340399 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044420738835 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741044431518 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019493451442 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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