Most people with university degree can earn higher salaries than those who not go to the university, so they should pay full cost of their education. Your opinion.
These days multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe and massive upsurge in the employees who received university degree and who does not received education degree is most controversial one. I will explain my point of view stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these, the people with higher degree education they received good job and all facility from the company because they have a capacity to do any kinds of hard work with applying a scientific or right way.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are person with no university education are struggle with many kinds of difficulties. These day people with high education live standard life and people who have no education they are poor living standard. A primary example of higher education are one of my best friend she is only pass higher secondary education they are doing job of security guard but i got university degree from university and i have a one good job in teaching. I live my life with many facility but she struggle with low economic status so university education is most important in our life.
Finally after taking afforemention point of view from my personal perspective i am inclined to believed that education is basic fundamental need of our life which fulfill all our demand and need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... argument and instance. To begin with, i can offer a variety of argument to supp...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hey are doing job of security guard but i got university degree from university a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun facility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many facilities'.
Suggestion: many facilities
...od job in teaching. I live my life with many facility but she struggle with low economic stat...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'struggles'.
Suggestion: struggles
...live my life with many facility but she struggle with low economic status so university ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ucation is most important in our life. Finally after taking afforemention point of vie...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347107438 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61628667115 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8553653813 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189926718747 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887785250706 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448130193971 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114589327964 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683645442992 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.