‘Movie stars and celebrities should be good role models and use their fame to promote worthy causes’. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the fact that Movie stars and celebrities should be good role models and use their fame to promote worthy causes. Over the years we have peoples arguing on both sides. I profoundly agree to this factor and I will be scrutinizing these throughout this essay.
There are a plethora of reasons that accounts to favor this statement. The most preponderant one is the fact that the influence that movie stars have in the minds of people. Most successful actors have a very good image in the society and when they promote something people are inclined to believe that they are for a good cause. This influential factor is one of the major reasons that the companies choose them for promoting their products. But this influential factor should be put to a good cause rather than using it as a means of income generation.
It has been proven in many occasions that the fame and influence that the actors possess can be a great factor of influence when promoting something for a good cause. One of the recent surveys conducted by the Deccan Chronicle regarding the variation of funds raised for worthy causes proved that those which were promoted by movie actors have an increase in the income over the others by a whooping factor of 30 percent.
To conclude, the fame and influence that movie stars have should be put for a good cause and not just to generate income. They as an individual has the moral value to extent the support for something that is good for the society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67883211679 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48819472821 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0632345808 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318735652782 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120525609492 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966108803592 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205468457972 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890235072071 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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