Nowadays, the bickering has common trend among st youngsters and married people. This has led polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify the response with your positive or negative views.
Polygamy refers to indulge in multiple marriages by a man or woman was always a controversial topic. Many people state that this practice has become very popular which has led to increase in divorce rates. I completely agree with the statement that bickering has become common trend and it has negative effects on present society. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why polygamy leading to high divorce rates with examples and thus lead to a appropriate conclusion.
To start with, I firmly believe that polygamy is not best approach to live a happy life because it gives birth to so many problems and creates disharmony in one's life. To include my point of view, firstly, it causes jealousy among husbands or wives which result in domestic abuse, conflicts, mismatch of thoughts between them that affect relationship. Secondly, it gives a hike to financial problems because of the demands of other partners. Moreover, polygamist children face emotion problems and they deprived of the love and affection from their parents.
Furthermore, polygamy is injurious and creates many mental health concerns to women those who are in those relationship, fostering negative emotions will ultimately effect the health life and finally leading to high divorce rate. In recent study conducted by University of California, found that 24.7 percent of men and 55.5 percent of women complained that emotional abuse is the main reason for getting separated. And another common reason is that issue of intimacy between couples , when couples going to get married they have certain set of goals, aspirations and certain things that can contribute to the relationship. Dramatic changes in any such things can lead to a high level of divorce rate.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that there are so many problems associated with the practice of polygamy. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that several reasons are contributed to high increase in divorce rates and it has negative impact for both male and female.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20180722892 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74604880278 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3511613174 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196445502802 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626376678482 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553762314573 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115259505266 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814806905453 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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