Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
Nowadays peoples' lives have become more stressful as compared to before. This leads to imbalance in their personal and professional life but this is unhealthy as well as it creates hurdles in family relationships. This essay will discuss why it is pertinent to maintain this balance.
To begin with, due to more demanding nature of the jobs, people are too involved in their works that they forget to take care of their health. Stressful jobs give people less time to be involved in the regular physical exercises or even to follow a good diet plan. For instance, working on a time-based target given by the higher management to finish a certain task leads people to forget about their well being and it can make them sick. Thus, it is essential to manage their time properly in order to remain fit.
Secondly, financial constraints forces people to take other part-time jobs to make their ends meet without realising that providing luxurious life to their family members is not as important as spending time with them is. By spending time together an attachment is created among all family, which is more beneficial. For example, I am currently struggling with finances as my father gave more time to us rather than earning money but I am satisfied with the way he spent time with us and have much strong bond with him as compared to my friends have with their fathers. Thus, time for family is most the important thing in life.
In conclusion, imbalance between professional and personal life can affect the health as well as family relationships. In my opinion, maintaining balance in both aspects of life is key to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86071428571 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61328776815 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4505050317 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256225685462 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093228024409 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416633585661 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153950221856 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355861996575 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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