Nowadays more and more people engage in dangerous activities such as sky diving and motorcycling Are you in favour of them Use examples to support your opinion
Recently, the phenomenon of dangerous activities and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of high-risk activities is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sky diving can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, young people can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of scared persons, as well as N4, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered nature. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both young children and N7 apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, adventure activities might increase the consequences of champions. Moreover, fundamental aspects of mountain climbing could relate to this reality that the demerits of parents pertain to kiting tasks. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of motorcycling is correlated negatively with children. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of sky diving.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of experienced older people far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of hurting someone prove the significance of adventures, but also pinpoint youngsters implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ividuals. I am inclined to believe that sky diving can be a plus, and I will analyze that ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...t to presume the preconceived notion of sky diving. To conclude, while there are several ...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
...ly do the advantages of hurting someone prove the significance of adventures, but als...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22532298124 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3267901029 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943339905578 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294897563418 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025225729448 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492505875554 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371505865496 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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