Recently, the phenomenon of spending too much time at work from people and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that having no time for the personal life is highly negative, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that giving importance for the family can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to dismiss whit devoting the personal lifetime to the working too much. At first, people can fulfill themselves and their families by working hard to more income. However, the hard-working is the cause of low time for personal living. They have no time to spending with their children and entertainments such as travelling and playing with the family members. For example, in the families with employment parents, the children are suffered by the lack of parent's kindness.
In addition, more working brings more money and in the end, well-being. But, they give up the best time of their living, those people who like to work for much time in every day.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite all advantages with hard-working, the benefits of being beside the family for a long time is far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0704845815 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81872238951 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594713656388 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5326686984 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387078203927 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141236384323 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706215543879 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219557049407 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679050724353 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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