Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

Television has come a long way in delivering entertainment and information. From its humble beginnings as a cathode ray tube box to the modern LED screens, television has been part of many households. Some people spend more than half of their day in front of the television. For many it is the only source of respite from the daily grind of life. We have seen how millions of dollars have been spent on broadcasting infrastructure to reach out to an increasing TV audience. Indeed, the television has been, and still is, among the best ways to deliver news and entertainment.

In countries where the population is aging, the television becomes the companion of choice for many elderly who have found themselves living alone or away from family. With the development of smart television and the internet, many of the elderly have been using their television sets not only to watch the movies but also to talk to loved ones far away. TV equipped with cameras and video conferencing software are now being used to talk with friends and family from any part of the world.

In the future we might see the television play a greater part in bringing people closer together as the technology allows us to enjoy greater interactivity with others through the internet. More and more social media platforms are making their software accessible through the television. I think the future is bright for the TV.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87447698745 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7640535988 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8863329931 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116370048011 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428695895608 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200177139883 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075576696423 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205671539844 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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