Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Undoubtedly, TV is one of the important inventions of the human’s history. TV not only entertain people and also make them aware of their surroundings. Some experts are of the view that it a medium to spread the news. Here, in the below essay I will further elaborate my viewpoint.
Television acts as an unlimited source of entertainment, news, knowledge and advertisements showing aspects of our lives. Channels like History, Discovery, National Geographic shows you the things that you are not even aware of. These channels feature content involving nature, science, culture, and history along with other entertainment programs. With their cognitive learning programs, they broaden the horizon of people especially students. A large body of research indicates that children learn better through visuals.
In addition news channels keep you updated with current happenings and events from around the globe. People can know about Syria’s civil war, watch the live update of American Presidential election or where NYSE closed today. In just a matter of time, TV brings you the breaking by pressing an appropriate button. Or you can watch any of your favorite programs. For example, it brings me the weather report so to plan my day well in advance.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, it is not wrong to say that TV like a companion for some. It is there is every household of a nation and influences life of people living in society. To conclude, TV is one of the miracles of science and it is up to us to make the best use of it.
- "Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words. 72
- Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on peoples life and work? 70
- Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?. 77
- Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 88
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... research indicates that children learn better through visuals. In addition news ch...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ren learn better through visuals. In addition news channels keep you updated with cur...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...t so to plan my day well in advance. Further emphasizing on my point of view, it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95555555556 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82964902068 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5856394886 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270498493713 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801835136941 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112627583002 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15572445099 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100884522807 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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